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Does anybody read forewords’?

I don’t like reading forewords, and if I do so it’s begrudgingly. Prefaces, forewords’ and acknowledgements are just a barrier through which I must plow in order to get to the story. Am I the only one?

My new novel, the one I shall publish after Geezers Two is called The Book of Pain and is (I hope) an original concept. In fact I did begin to write a foreword. It was going to be precise, concise and the epitome of brevity. Unfortunately after a few days it had grown exponentially, and not wanting to chuck away what I hoped was some decent writing I decided to make it chapter one and do away with anything before it.

Would I be harming the book if I do? The now first chapter holds all the information the reader needs to know about how it all began and will, I hope, be enough to persuade them to continue. And as it’s only four pages long should not be too burdensome.
In order to do something I’ve included the two passages below before chapter one. They are in context with the novel and not simply chosen for their unpleasant wording.

Any thoughts on the matter would be welcome.

Now I am glad I sent it, not because it hurt you, but because the pain caused you to repent and change your ways. 2 Corinthians 7:9

Indeed, those who disbelieve in our signs, we will roast them at a fire. As often as their skins are wholly burned, we will give them in exchange other skins, that they may taste the punishment.” (Qur’an, 4:56)

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4 thoughts on “Does anybody read forewords’?

  1. Interesting passages you’ve chosen there Roger. As a Christian I’m vaguely familiar with the first and I suspect that when read in context it doesn’t sound quite as draconian!

    It does make me quite intrigued though about the story and how these two quotes relate to it.

  2. I’m just beginning the third of probably a million edits and I hope to publish by…soon. I’ll put up the first chapter as soon as I think it’s good enough.

  3. Right, I’ll just finish Geezers 2 and get on it.

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